17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
1.) https://youtu.be/XEJ4l60N6Ko
2.) The one thing that
was important was the tone of the speaker’s voice and the accent or rest in the
pitch. These things greatly contribute to grabbing the audience attention. The
feedback that I thought was useful was that I had to speak-up, because it was difficult
to understand what I was saying from time-to-time.
3.) Based on the
feedback, I tried to speak louder and provided more detail about milktea.
Hey Tan,
ReplyDeleteI think you made a big improvement from the last elevator pitch. I liked how you explained what milk tea actually is. I think that is very useful in the elevator pitch so that everyone is on the same page. You spoke slowly which made it easy to understand and follow along. You had some hiccups during the pitch but you were able to continue on! Great job, as that is essential when doing an actual elevator pitch. I think adding some numbers in the pitch would be helpful!
Hi Tan. Your elevator pitch displays a large improvement from the last pitch in your post. Your grabbed the attention of the audience by speaking up, which you improved from your last pitch. The information you provided in depth on the product, milktea, allowed for your pitch to be more detailed and improved.
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