22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://youtu.be/m2TQvr-beyM
The thing that i would consider the most important is a person voice when delivering an elevator speech. You have to capture the audience attention with your voice by speaking loudly, adding emphasize, and changing your tone. In the feedback, classmates stated that I spoked up which may it easier to understand and classmates also notice that I had I couple of hiccups in the previous pitch which i tried to fix this time. Other than that, I thought the comments were spot-on.
Hi Tan. Your indication that a person's voice when delivering an elevator pitch is the most important is important, in my opinion. This allows the audience to pay further attention to what you are saying and convey the message of your pitch. The way that you made clear that you tried to speak up in your pitch and decrease the amount of hiccups made for a better pitch.
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ReplyDeleteI think this is the best elevator pitch you have. Your voice sounds different in this one. It sounds more mature and sophisticated which is a positive. This will make people take you more seriously. However your tone as not the same as it was in the first one. I felt like you were more enthusiastic in the first video.
Hi Tan, your elevator pitch has really improved. I can tell you worked on having a personal voice and it shows in your delivery. You did a nice job of changing your tone and using emphasis. You didn't have any hiccups and you spoke clearly. Good job on selling your idea! I can see it really going somewhere.
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